Notes on a scene from ‘The Bakery Assistant’

Here are some of the best reviews I got on a party scene at the end of Chapter 5 of ‘The Bakery Assistant’.  I appreciate the Houston Writers Guild and their critique circles for all their help. By the end of the month I’ll post another scene from the novel I wrote for NaNoWritMo-50,000 words… Read More Notes on a scene from ‘The Bakery Assistant’

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I wrote 50,000 words in twenty-two days in the month of November, completing the NaNoWritMo 2015 challenge, and won first place in the Houston Writers Guild.   Last Wednesday I brought the first scene in the infamous ‘party scene’ that I wrote which includes characters named after two friends I’ve had since the eighth grade:… Read More Latest Feedback from ‘The Bakery Assistant’